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25 November 2010

Writing Session Intermediate 8

Hello, here it goes my composition for the writing session, it obviously has many mistakes that were properly corrected by the teacher.

Title: A Taugh Day

Last year during my finals at university I spent all night revising till 3 o'clock in the morning because i was going to be examined on economics, so after a couple of hours I felt really tired and slowly I fell asleep.
Some hours late I woke up bleary-eyed, got dressed and had a light breakfast. Despite the rush-hour traffic I finally arrived 10 minutes late and then I run as fast as I could, however, to my surprise all my classmates were getting out of the classroom.
At first it really terrified me because I thought everyone had already finished the exam, but after asking to my friends about the exam I felt so excited that I nearly cried, the exam was actually next week.

Okay, at this point I can easily recognize almost all the grammar slips I made and this is the fixed version of my compo, I hope not to miss anything!

Last year(,) during my finals at university(,) I spent all night revising till 3 o'clock in the morning because i was going to be examined on economics, so after a couple of hours I felt really tired and slowly I fell asleep.
Some hours late I woke up bleary-eyed, got dressed and had a light breakfast. Despite the rush-hour traffic I finally arrived 10 minutes late and then(,) I run as fast as I could, however, to my surprise all my classmates were getting out of the classroom.
At first(,) it really terrified me because I thought everyone had already finished the exam, but after asking (to) my friends about the exam(,) I felt so excited that I nearly cried, the exam was actually next week.

(...) → a missing punctuation sign or word.
(...) → an incorrect word written.


If you found any other mistake, please let me know!

1 comment:

  1. Hola, bonito writing yo estoy en básico 11 y me gusta este blog ojalá publiques más cosas, me gustaría aprender un poco más.

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