Title: A Taugh Day
Last year during my finals at university I spent all night revising till 3 o'clock in the morning because i was going to be examined on economics, so after a couple of hours I felt really tired and slowly I fell asleep.
Some hours late I woke up bleary-eyed, got dressed and had a light breakfast. Despite the rush-hour traffic I finally arrived 10 minutes late and then I run as fast as I could, however, to my surprise all my classmates were getting out of the classroom.
At first it really terrified me because I thought everyone had already finished the exam, but after asking to my friends about the exam I felt so excited that I nearly cried, the exam was actually next week.
Okay, at this point I can easily recognize almost all the grammar slips I made and this is the fixed version of my compo, I hope not to miss anything!
Last year(,) during my finals at university(,) I spent all night revising till 3 o'clock in the morning because i was going to be examined on economics, so after a couple of hours I felt really tired and slowly I fell asleep.
Some hours late I woke up bleary-eyed, got dressed and had a light breakfast. Despite the rush-hour traffic I finally arrived 10 minutes late and then(,) I run as fast as I could, however, to my surprise all my classmates were getting out of the classroom.
At first(,) it really terrified me because I thought everyone had already finished the exam, but after asking (to) my friends about the exam(,) I felt so excited that I nearly cried, the exam was actually next week.
(...) → a missing punctuation sign or word.
(...) → an incorrect word written.
If you found any other mistake, please let me know!
Hola, bonito writing yo estoy en básico 11 y me gusta este blog ojalá publiques más cosas, me gustaría aprender un poco más.
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